Andrea, it is your decision to include or exclude the author -- and since you prefer to exclude, I agree.
I like your addition in the Disclaimer section. I have not thoroughly re-read everything yet, but noted the section you added on rotoscoping which makes sense to me. The section on Multicam on CinGG seems to mostly discuss time/synchronization but not the Mixers, which is described in the manual, section 6.7. As you mentioned in your last email, it is a little confusing to me.
Will wait to see if IgorB or anyone submits any changes before I see if I have any more changes.