Hi, Great job!
This part is a little more complicated, so I've made less-than-optimal decisions. For example: - I used "source code listing", I think improperly. But I don't know how to do it better.
No, you are absolutely right that used source code listing. I added the descriptions to it.
- Between page 94 and 95, figure 4.6 slipped forward after the beginning of the next section. I don't like it very much, but I don't know what to do. I'm filing that I can't get you right. Are figure 4.6 placed after the start of new section? In my pdf it's placed before the new section.
I put all file path and names in \texttt{} to visually separate them. And added two subsections for file list and image2ffmpeg. Also I increased width of some figures because text was to small on them. Also I modified Introduction.tex to add references to new chapters.